[T][CE] The Broken Turnabout ★
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Re: [T][CE] The Broken Turnabout ●
☆ This case is pending a QA inspection to be featured.
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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Re: [T][CE] The Broken Turnabout ☆
GOOD.
Also, good luck~ (I'm pretty sure you'll pass buuuuuuut... xP)
Also, good luck~ (I'm pretty sure you'll pass buuuuuuut... xP)
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Re: [T][CE] The Broken Turnabout ☆
Good luck!
I'll play the newest version and give a detailed review when college is leaving me something resembling free time, which... might not be any time soon
I'll play the newest version and give a detailed review when college is leaving me something resembling free time, which... might not be any time soon
Re: [T][CE] The Broken Turnabout ☆
Enjoyed the case gj man. What and where can find the remastered music you used during the trials?
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@tardive: All music used in The Broken Turnabout exists in the AAO case editor. We have quite the nice variety here hosted right on the site! ^-^
Also, kwando1313 and Evolina deLuna, thank you for the support! It's a bit nerve-wracking, but I've given it my all so all I can do is wait to see what happens!
Also, kwando1313 and Evolina deLuna, thank you for the support! It's a bit nerve-wracking, but I've given it my all so all I can do is wait to see what happens!
The score is still Q to 12. Shirley Homes avatar by my Invisible Friend. They're an awesome artist!
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Good luck on getting Featured... but I don't think you'll need it, this case was pretty awesome. This was really fun to play, and it felt really cool to solve the case again without using any supernatural abilities (magatama/bracelet/etc.).
There was one point about the case I felt iffy about though;
There was one point about the case I felt iffy about though;
Spoiler : Newspaper & Revenge :
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Spoiler : @Mathias_Trueman: :
The score is still Q to 12. Shirley Homes avatar by my Invisible Friend. They're an awesome artist!
A huge thanks to my Invisible Friend for this AMAZING Shirley Homes art!
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Re: [T][CE] The Broken Turnabout ☆
QA Review: The Broken Turnabout
Bribery shall not save you. And I prefer physical chemistry to organic chemistry anyways.
Broken is one of the last things you would expect on Ace Attorney Online. We have our locked room cases. We have some narratively-driven cases. But a case that takes place in Ace Attorney's narrative world without trying to redefine it?! This may be a first for us. So how does this innovative trial fare against our QA standards? Answers below!
Bribery shall not save you. And I prefer physical chemistry to organic chemistry anyways.
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For Check #1, I'll be stealing borrowing and then modifying Evolina's format.✮ – The Sparkling Feature Star is given for an aspect that makes your trial stand out even among the featured trials. Getting a Sparkling Feature Star means your trial is pretty much guaranteed to be featured after implementing the changes from check 2, unless it gets a Hollow Star.In [url=http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/forum/viewtopic.php?p=380232#p380232]Case featuring and QA[/url], ShadowEdgeworth wrote:They check that it has an overall story and gameplay of astounding quality; it should be really engaging, have interesting contradictions and be really fun.
+ – The Great Plus means that this aspect makes your good trial great. You don't need a Great Plus in every category, but you should have at least one Great Plus or Sparkling Feature Star for the trial to be featured.
✓✓ – The Double Check Mark means that this aspect is good enough for a featured trial. Almost everything in this area works solidly, but it lacks a "wow" factor. An otherwise great aspect that requires some non-trivial tweaking falls in here.
✓ – The Single Check Mark means that this aspect can be good enough for a featured trial, but requires not major, but non-trivial modifications to make it truly solid. You must not have any Single Check Marks in order to pass Check 2.
✰ – The Hollow Star marks a problem that can't be fixed without a major rewrite. A trial must not have any Hollow Stars in order to pass Check 1. If you get one, don't be discouraged! Remember that a Hollow Star is only a star that hasn't been filled yet. It's something you can work on when improving this trial or writing your next one, and once you've worked on it, go for another QA review!
Spoiler : Check #1: Here Be Spoilers! :
Spoiler : Check #2: Minimal Spoilers :
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Spoiler : VERDICT :
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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Re: [T][CE] The Broken Turnabout ☆
Except when it does.Enthalpy wrote:Bribery shall not save you.
Gratz~
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Congratulations!
Let's have a link party! HYAAUGH!
AJ:AA fifth case (in progress): http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/player. ... l_id=74903, http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/player. ... l_id=75312
PW:AA/Hunger Games crossover: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9921478/1/ ... ce-Tribute
PW:AA:DD/Hunger Games crossover: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10668624/1 ... -Destinies
Inquisitor Barnham backstory thing (PLvAA): https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11034506/1 ... abyrinthia
Dangan Ronpa fangame/fanblog thing (in progress): http://thehoteldespair.tumblr.com/
AJ:AA fifth case (in progress): http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/player. ... l_id=74903, http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/player. ... l_id=75312
PW:AA/Hunger Games crossover: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9921478/1/ ... ce-Tribute
PW:AA:DD/Hunger Games crossover: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10668624/1 ... -Destinies
Inquisitor Barnham backstory thing (PLvAA): https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11034506/1 ... abyrinthia
Dangan Ronpa fangame/fanblog thing (in progress): http://thehoteldespair.tumblr.com/
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Oh my gosh... just wow... WOW! Thank you so much to everyone who helped The Broken Turnabout get this far! For my first fancase to receive a Featured status, well, it's really an honor! Thank you for the congratulations, Bad Player, gavinnersroadie!
Holy cow, you don't know how excited I am, I literally had to read through that QA review twice just to calm down enough to start typing this.
I will be sure to implement all of the necessary presentational edits at once. Enthalpy, when I'm done, should I post here again or send a message to you?
Holy cow, you don't know how excited I am, I literally had to read through that QA review twice just to calm down enough to start typing this.
Spoiler : @ Enthalpy (slight spoilers, but not all that much really, nothing specific at all, just maybe about what the case will be like as you play) :
The score is still Q to 12. Shirley Homes avatar by my Invisible Friend. They're an awesome artist!
A huge thanks to my Invisible Friend for this AMAZING Shirley Homes art!
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A big thanks to gotMLK7 for this Shirley Homes and Connie Harper art. He is an awesome artist!
A huge thanks to my Invisible Friend for this AMAZING Shirley Homes art!
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A PM would be preferred, since I'll read it faster.
Reading over the review again, I did see one slip-up on my part. It wasn't that innovation is inherently a good thing; I'd argue that it isn't, and that innovation for the sake of innovation usually goes wrong. The two things I highlighted are good in themselves, and I was more commenting on how peculiar it is that they've been foreign to AAO so far - that thought has been in the back of my mind for a lot of this second playthrough, but again, it wasn't quite fitting for the QA review. I'll save it for the follow-up, with the character and narrative-CE thoughts. I expect to happen in... about a week, and if you don't mind, I'd like to post it here.
Reading over the review again, I did see one slip-up on my part. It wasn't that innovation is inherently a good thing; I'd argue that it isn't, and that innovation for the sake of innovation usually goes wrong. The two things I highlighted are good in themselves, and I was more commenting on how peculiar it is that they've been foreign to AAO so far - that thought has been in the back of my mind for a lot of this second playthrough, but again, it wasn't quite fitting for the QA review. I'll save it for the follow-up, with the character and narrative-CE thoughts. I expect to happen in... about a week, and if you don't mind, I'd like to post it here.
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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Ah, I understand. And posting the follow-up here would be great. Thank you so much again! I still haven't quite properly calmed down, eheheh...
The score is still Q to 12. Shirley Homes avatar by my Invisible Friend. They're an awesome artist!
A huge thanks to my Invisible Friend for this AMAZING Shirley Homes art!
Shirley Homes
Connie Harper
A big thanks to gotMLK7 for this Shirley Homes and Connie Harper art. He is an awesome artist!
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Shirley Homes
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Re: [T][CE] The Broken Turnabout ☆
Gratz on the featuring~
(Though, it was pretty obviously coming.)
(Though, it was pretty obviously coming.)
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Re: [T][CE] The Broken Turnabout ☆
Congrats - the trial definitely deserved it.