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Trial: Turnabout Chill 

Message par Meph » Lun Fév 09, 2009 11:49 pm

Turnabout Chill
Will Phoenix be able to save Iris from a guilty verdict once again?

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Story
Sister Bikini has been murdered by someone unknown in the Inner Temple. The police believe it was Sister Iris, who was in the room at the time, but was it really her? Phoenix doesn't think so, and is prepared to defend Iris to the bitter end.

Join Phoenix Wright in another exciting courtroom adventure, with more evidence, the many interesting characters and plently of contradictions.

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Part 1 is a bit easy, simple and short, but still fun. Part 2 will be more challenging for most and longer.

This is the first case I have ever made, but I believe it is still of high quality. Enjoy and tell me your opinions.

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Re: Case Announcement: Turnabout Chill - Part 1 

Message par Flandre » Mar Fév 10, 2009 12:06 am

If I must say, it was fairly short and lacked content, but the feel of it was fresh and one of the few playable ones here. Also, learn how to add a testimony, like Gumshoe saying, "The murder must have thrown the weapon into Eagle River", then create an objection based off of that.
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Re: Case Announcement: Turnabout Chill - Part 1 

Message par Meph » Mar Fév 10, 2009 12:08 am

How I presented it was the intention, but adding it to the testimony is a far better idea. ;)
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Re: Case Announcement: Turnabout Chill - Part 1 

Message par Dramatica » Mar Fév 10, 2009 12:08 am

Indeed.

However, it was one of the few decent ones around here, and was fun to play. Good job.
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Re: Case Announcement: Turnabout Chill - Part 1 

Message par Meph » Mar Fév 10, 2009 9:19 pm

The case has been improved based on current feedback (along with some other minor addictions). Tell me what you all think. ;)
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Re: Case Announcement: Turnabout Chill - Part 1 

Message par Forcemaster » Mar Fév 10, 2009 11:37 pm

Meph a écrit :The case has been improved based on current feedback (along with some other minor addictions). Tell me what you all think. ;)


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Re: Case Announcement: Turnabout Chill - Part 1 

Message par Meph » Jeu Fév 12, 2009 11:10 pm

Are there any imperfections in Part 1? I want it to seem exactly like a proper Ace Attorney game that was written by Shu.
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Re: Turnabout Chill - Part 1 

Message par Meph » Lun Fév 23, 2009 9:39 pm

I've recreated the trial from scratch in v4. It now makes use of v4's new features.
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Re: Turnabout Chill - Part 1 

Message par Unas » Lun Fév 23, 2009 9:45 pm

You should edit your first post to link to the new one :wink:
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Re: Turnabout Chill - Part 1 

Message par Meph » Lun Fév 23, 2009 10:22 pm

Woops. Looks like I forgot. :P Thanks for reminding me.
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Re: Turnabout Chill - Part 1 

Message par cooki3000 » Mar Mars 03, 2009 2:34 am

How did you do that of adding testimony? I tried but I couldn't do.

By the way, when you point the contradiction on the photo the judge appears above the photo.
You forgot to put "hide character".
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Re: Turnabout Chill - Part 1 

Message par Meph » Mar Mars 03, 2009 11:03 pm

Thank you for pointing out that bug to me, cooki.
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Re: Turnabout Chill - Part 1 

Message par henke37 » Sam Avr 18, 2009 11:19 pm

Hey, are you abandoning this case? You started a new one without finishing this one.

Also, "stab womb" and "no where".
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Re: Turnabout Chill - Part 1 

Message par Meph » Sam Avr 18, 2009 11:35 pm

henke37 a écrit :Hey, are you abandoning this case? You started a new one without finishing this one.

Yes. I think I have abandoned it. When I create cases, I only have a basic idea for the story in mind. I think of all the details as I go along. That's why this project has failed. However, if anyone would like to see what I've done so far, I won't mind releasing it. ;)

henke37 a écrit :Also, "stab womb".

I say. I didn't realise my case was about female anatomy. :P Anyway, thank you. I'll fix that.
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Re: Trial Showcase: Turnabout Chill - Part 1 

Message par Meph » Mar Déc 06, 2011 10:25 pm

Gaaah. I always cringe when I read the old posts in this thread. It's like I was trying to be excessively posh to fit in. :XD:

Anyway, I've decided to cancel this project. It's never going to be finished anyway. However, there's no point letting my work go to waste, so I'm releasing what I've done so far in chapter 2.
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