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Hello!
Just to say, the entirety of part 1 is now complete! I'll be submitting it to QA, and then be starting immediately on Part 2.
Please let me know if there are any questions or feedback or anything
Thank you for playing!
Just to say, the entirety of part 1 is now complete! I'll be submitting it to QA, and then be starting immediately on Part 2.
Please let me know if there are any questions or feedback or anything
Thank you for playing!
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☆ This case is pending a QA inspection to be featured.
Well. Interesting genre for me to be reviewing.
Well. Interesting genre for me to be reviewing.
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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I've actually been waiting for this first part to finish development. That's why I haven't tried it until now. Visual Novels are very much my thing, so I'll be trying this out.
I will wait for the next part. I'm really glad a story like this exists in case form.
Spoiler : SoC :
Spoiler : Thoughts :
A Laggy Turnabout ★
A Batty Turnabout ★
A Tricky Turnabout ★
Upcoming: A Worldly Turnabout, A Courtly Turnabout, A Clumsy Turnabout, A Needy Turnabout
A Batty Turnabout ★
A Tricky Turnabout ★
Upcoming: A Worldly Turnabout, A Courtly Turnabout, A Clumsy Turnabout, A Needy Turnabout
Re: [M] Miles Edgeworth Dating Sim; Part 1: ☆
Thank you for playing! ^^ I really enjoyed reading all of your comments xD And thanks for the corrections, too - I've gone ahead and implemented all of the smaller fixesTiagofvarela wrote:I've actually been waiting for this first part to finish development. That's why I haven't tried it until now. Visual Novels are very much my thing, so I'll be trying this out.Spoiler : SoC :I will wait for the next part. I'm really glad a story like this exists in case form.Spoiler : Thoughts :
Thank you as well for your positive feedback! It's always nice to see when someone's enjoyed something you've had a hand in making
A couple of responses to some of the bigger things you brought up:
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Re: [M] Miles Edgeworth Dating Sim; Part 1: ☆ Part 2: ●○○○○○
Just a quick update!
I've now completed chapter 15, the first chapter of part 2.
This is a link to part 2: http://www.aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=103764
Chapter 15 acts as a sort of prologue to the second part, so it isn't very long, but just so people know that it's completed.
I've also made a few very minor tweaks to part 1 on the request of the original author.
I've now completed chapter 15, the first chapter of part 2.
This is a link to part 2: http://www.aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=103764
Chapter 15 acts as a sort of prologue to the second part, so it isn't very long, but just so people know that it's completed.
I've also made a few very minor tweaks to part 1 on the request of the original author.
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Finally got time to play the rest of Part 1 and I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU PUT ME IN THE CREDITS! Thank you so much! I'm gonna go edit this video right after posting this, and it'll go up tomorrow.Vielwerth wrote:Hello!
Just to say, the entirety of part 1 is now complete! I'll be submitting it to QA, and then be starting immediately on Part 2.
Please let me know if there are any questions or feedback or anything
Thank you for playing!
Honestly, this has been incredible. I can't describe how much I've enjoyed it so far! I'll be waiting in anticipation for the rest of the story.
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Thanks for your patience with my crazy schedule!
Now that the competition is taken care of, I can get back to the QA review.
Now that the competition is taken care of, I can get back to the QA review.
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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Chapter 16 is now complete!
Sorry this one took so long! I had a bit of writer's block in the investigation bit. But I got past it, and it's all done now!
Part 2 has chapter select, just like part 1, so if you've already played chapter 15, you can just skip straight to 16.
And I have a special hint for this chapter: Examine the Steel Samurai statue in Edgeworth's office. Because I spent far too long on that section and I think there are a lot of people who don't examine anything at all ^^; But if you examine it, you'll be in for a treat~
And thank you Enthalpy for accepting this for QA review! I'm looking forward to the feedback so that I can tighten up part 1.
I'm hoping chapter 17 won't take me too long!
Sorry this one took so long! I had a bit of writer's block in the investigation bit. But I got past it, and it's all done now!
Part 2 has chapter select, just like part 1, so if you've already played chapter 15, you can just skip straight to 16.
And I have a special hint for this chapter: Examine the Steel Samurai statue in Edgeworth's office. Because I spent far too long on that section and I think there are a lot of people who don't examine anything at all ^^; But if you examine it, you'll be in for a treat~
And thank you Enthalpy for accepting this for QA review! I'm looking forward to the feedback so that I can tighten up part 1.
I'm hoping chapter 17 won't take me too long!
Aha, no problem! You've really helped me to get more interest in this, and I love watching you play through it! So I'm the one who should be gratefulkidusrox wrote: Finally got time to play the rest of Part 1 and I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU PUT ME IN THE CREDITS! Thank you so much! I'm gonna go edit this video right after posting this, and it'll go up tomorrow.
Honestly, this has been incredible. I can't describe how much I've enjoyed it so far! I'll be waiting in anticipation for the rest of the story.
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Thanks again for your patience with the review. It's been a combination of letting myself be carried away with work and this being a difficult review for me. This is not my usual genre, by any means.
I'll have something more concrete by this time next week. Remind me here if I forget.
I'll have something more concrete by this time next week. Remind me here if I forget.
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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Hey, it's no problem! I know how hectic life can get and stuff, so I'm not getting impatient or anything, and I know this is a little niche, so ^^;Enthalpy wrote:Thanks again for your patience with the review. It's been a combination of letting myself be carried away with work and this being a difficult review for me. This is not my usual genre, by any means.
I'll have something more concrete by this time next week. Remind me here if I forget.
Nevertheless, here's the reminder you asked for
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Thank you. Before I get any further, I should confirm...
Spoiler : :
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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Answers in the spoilers!
Thank you very much! I'm looking forward to the feedback!
I think that's it. Let me know if there's anything else. I should say as well, that these answers are what I understand from the original work having read the whole thing, and the original author may have intended some things differently to how I've interpreted them.Enthalpy wrote:Thank you. Before I get any further, I should confirm...
Spoiler : :
Thank you very much! I'm looking forward to the feedback!
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Hello!
Just a quick note to say that Chapter 17 is complete! It took a long time because I made the decision to put in a CG. I'm not a great artist, but I'm hoping it will do its job, as the scene in question just couldn't be done justice with text alone.
Anyway, I'm off to start Chapter 18! I hope you will all enjoy it!
Just a quick note to say that Chapter 17 is complete! It took a long time because I made the decision to put in a CG. I'm not a great artist, but I'm hoping it will do its job, as the scene in question just couldn't be done justice with text alone.
Anyway, I'm off to start Chapter 18! I hope you will all enjoy it!
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This has obviously taken a lot longer than expected. Part of it it my being distracted with work, but I'll admit that my not knowing how to approach a game like this isn't helping.
Accordingly, I'm going to change the review format from normal, to make procrastination harder for me.
This is going to be a modular review. I discuss one aspect of the case at a time in spoiler tags, in more detail than usual. You can respond as soon as I post a piece and point out cases where something I take issue with really is just part of the genre. I'll still be sorting out my feelings on the case as I go, so I'll have an open mind to any comments you have on my review as I go. The goal is to get through at least two "modules" a week.
Does this sound good to you? If so, I think I'll start with the characters of Edgeworth and Nina.
Accordingly, I'm going to change the review format from normal, to make procrastination harder for me.
This is going to be a modular review. I discuss one aspect of the case at a time in spoiler tags, in more detail than usual. You can respond as soon as I post a piece and point out cases where something I take issue with really is just part of the genre. I'll still be sorting out my feelings on the case as I go, so I'll have an open mind to any comments you have on my review as I go. The goal is to get through at least two "modules" a week.
Does this sound good to you? If so, I think I'll start with the characters of Edgeworth and Nina.
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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Enthalpy wrote:This has obviously taken a lot longer than expected. Part of it it my being distracted with work, but I'll admit that my not knowing how to approach a game like this isn't helping.
Accordingly, I'm going to change the review format from normal, to make procrastination harder for me.
This is going to be a modular review. I discuss one aspect of the case at a time in spoiler tags, in more detail than usual. You can respond as soon as I post a piece and point out cases where something I take issue with really is just part of the genre. I'll still be sorting out my feelings on the case as I go, so I'll have an open mind to any comments you have on my review as I go. The goal is to get through at least two "modules" a week.
Does this sound good to you? If so, I think I'll start with the characters of Edgeworth and Nina.
That sounds fine to me! I can understand that this is a little out of the ordinary, so please take as much time as you need to. I'm looking forward to your comments!