[T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○

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Re: [T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○

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About the map:
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I'm not sure that stabbing over the couch works. That's a lot of distance between you and the back of a person who is standing a foot or so away from the couch. It might work if the culprit could lean over the couch, but then you'd want the back of the couch to Phoenix. Which you could do. Phoenix's office looked like a war zone already.
Good luck with the other changes! Again, I'm looking forward to it.
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Re: [T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○

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I will say this: Please keep the "Congratulations, you're not special" line. That is just golden.
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Re: [T] [CE] Turnabout To Nothing ○

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Of course I'm keeping that, It's the best thing I've ever written.
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