TNB(DEMO) IS OUT NOW!
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TNB(DEMO) IS OUT NOW!
"How hard will you fight for the ones you care about most?"
'An ACE ATTORNEY fan-case'
'Takes place between Trials & Tribulations AND Apollo Justice: Ace Attorney'
Hello everyone! So, basically I decided to make a case that I thought about for a while now, and I am still working on it! I try not to rush it, and since I'm new here, I might make a few mistakes in the game, so please give me your feedbacks! I know, it's pretty short, but I would like to hear your thoughts about it!
Play the case here!
http://aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=135939
THIS CASE IS A DEMO, THE FULL CASE MAY OR MAY NOT INCLUDE NEW THINGS!
EDIT: I have updated the game a bit, and I tried to reduce the numbers of blank frames. The psyche lock sequences are updated as well, and I have added a gameover scene!
Have fun!
Last edited by Selif on Sat Nov 21, 2020 2:26 am, edited 1 time in total.
"The only time a lawyer can cry is when it's all over."
TURNABOUT NEW BEGINNING DEMO IS OUT NOW, FEEL FREE TO PLAY!
http://aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=135939
TURNABOUT NEW BEGINNING DEMO IS OUT NOW, FEEL FREE TO PLAY!
http://aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=135939
- Awsome2464
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Re: TNB(DEMO) IS OUT NOW!
Right at the beginning of the case, when the first scene starts, I can't progress. All I can see is a black background and the "skipping" icon on the bottom screen.
Re: TNB(DEMO) IS OUT NOW!
Hmm... I tested it just now, and I haven't experienced anything like that. Have you tried pressing that skipping icon?Awsome2464 wrote: ↑Sat Nov 14, 2020 4:24 am Right at the beginning of the case, when the first scene starts, I can't progress. All I can see is a black background and the "skipping" icon on the bottom screen.
"The only time a lawyer can cry is when it's all over."
TURNABOUT NEW BEGINNING DEMO IS OUT NOW, FEEL FREE TO PLAY!
http://aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=135939
TURNABOUT NEW BEGINNING DEMO IS OUT NOW, FEEL FREE TO PLAY!
http://aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=135939
- SuperAj3
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Re: TNB(DEMO) IS OUT NOW!
There is a blank frame before the black screen opens to the detention center. Clicking again moved me to the next bit of dialogue.Awsome2464 wrote: ↑Sat Nov 14, 2020 4:24 am Right at the beginning of the case, when the first scene starts, I can't progress. All I can see is a black background and the "skipping" icon on the bottom screen.
@Selif: Maybe you need to add a timer to it, or delete any blank frames?
EDIT: I ended up playing the case in full LOL. Overall you did a pretty good job! Most of your text is proof-read which is nice to see and you did well using the features like psyche locks and sfx. I just think your case needs more polish. The case also moves incredibly quickly. I think you need to take more time explaining things and setting up what's about to happen. I have no clue why I'm now Apollo and thrown into a case defending Maggey Byrde for theft when I was just playing as Phoenix talking to Iris in the detention centre.
That being said, using courtroom sprites in the lobby between Apollo and Kristoph looked very proper like a cutscene picture XD Nice work with that!
Spoiler : Some improvements :
Re: TNB(DEMO) IS OUT NOW!
Thank you for your feedback! I will try to improve the game and add more details as you said, I'm still a newbie here, haha. Your feedback means a lot to me! And a tutorial would be a great idea, I'll look into it. Again, thank you so much!SuperAj3 wrote: ↑Tue Nov 17, 2020 11:49 pmThere is a blank frame before the black screen opens to the detention center. Clicking again moved me to the next bit of dialogue.Awsome2464 wrote: ↑Sat Nov 14, 2020 4:24 am Right at the beginning of the case, when the first scene starts, I can't progress. All I can see is a black background and the "skipping" icon on the bottom screen.
@Selif: Maybe you need to add a timer to it, or delete any blank frames?
EDIT: I ended up playing the case in full LOL. Overall you did a pretty good job! Most of your text is proof-read which is nice to see and you did well using the features like psyche locks and sfx. I just think your case needs more polish. The case also moves incredibly quickly. I think you need to take more time explaining things and setting up what's about to happen. I have no clue why I'm now Apollo and thrown into a case defending Maggey Byrde for theft when I was just playing as Phoenix talking to Iris in the detention centre.
That being said, using courtroom sprites in the lobby between Apollo and Kristoph looked very proper like a cutscene picture XD Nice work with that!
Spoiler : Some improvements :
"The only time a lawyer can cry is when it's all over."
TURNABOUT NEW BEGINNING DEMO IS OUT NOW, FEEL FREE TO PLAY!
http://aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=135939
TURNABOUT NEW BEGINNING DEMO IS OUT NOW, FEEL FREE TO PLAY!
http://aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=135939
- Enthalpy
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Re: TNB(DEMO) IS OUT NOW!
Hi, I was playing through this case and encountered a bug. Could you fix it? Let me know when it's fixed, and I'll get back to playing through the demo.
Spoiler : The Bug :
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
Re: TNB(DEMO) IS OUT NOW!
thank you for letting me know! that must have slipped through my attention, I'll be sure to fix it today or tomorrow, though I'm not sure if I can update the game more often, because my exams are coming up. haha, bad timing for making a case, I guess.
"The only time a lawyer can cry is when it's all over."
TURNABOUT NEW BEGINNING DEMO IS OUT NOW, FEEL FREE TO PLAY!
http://aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=135939
TURNABOUT NEW BEGINNING DEMO IS OUT NOW, FEEL FREE TO PLAY!
http://aaonline.fr/player.php?trial_id=135939
- Enthalpy
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Re: TNB(DEMO) IS OUT NOW!
I completely understand. Just post here when it's fixed, and I'll start this up again.
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson