[T] Turnabout Carjack ★

[Meph]

A bit thin on the sound effects in my opinion.

I have to agree with you there. Any suggestions on where to put them?

[henke37]

How about where there is visual effects?

[Meph]

Fixed. Thanks.

[Zeonark]

I lol'd at the victim. Also Franziska's whip cracking is missing the second sound effect like from the games, if it can be added. Part 2 was somewhat short compared to part 1. Hopefully Part 3 will be longer. Also, thank god for Internet Explorer being horrible at not letting you point to the wrong thing, I nearly died xD

Can't wait for Part 3, This is seriously getting interesting.

[Meph]

I'm glad you liked it. However, I couldn't include the second whip sound because it is not included in AAO's system.

[LucasSNM]

Great trial! I only found two errors.

In trial Middle, the receipt can be seen when the trial is being loaded.

Also, you ended the two parts too fast. Maybe Edgeworth thinking something about the trial could help.

[Meph]

Thanks. I'll keep that in mind.

[Meph]

Part 3 will be completed today.

[LucasSNM]

Today? O.o! I can't wait. You have to update the first page

[Meph]

I should stop using those percentage meters. I never update them.

Anyway, I'm just finishing off the conclusion now and it will be done.

[LucasSNM]

Hey, I noticed something:

You can play as Miles Edgeworth in the defendant's chair.

Defendant chair?

[Meph]

Everything is done. This is the best trial I have ever made.

http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=8970

[Transfinite]

Very well put together, and it's nice to play a trial that's not a murder. There are a few issues, though.

Spoiler : Case spoilers :

-Not all the desk slams have accompanying sound effects.
-Edgeworth's mouth sometimes moves when he's thinking.
-Yeah, it's based on a TV series, but somehow... pedophilia doesn't really seem to fit into the universe. It was really jarring every time it came up, and it wound up not being relevant to the case at all, just making it even more jarring.
-Before cross-examining Anna, Edgeworth states that he needs to find her guilty, but he hasn't yet come to the conclusion that she's the culprit.
-After pointing out the contradiction in Anna's testimony, Edgeworth comments that she said the window was open when he should have said she said the window was closed.
-You can't forge fingerprints. It's not possible unless you're like... a shapeshifter or something. I know that the glove wasn't forged in the end, but it's not something that Edgeworth would ever accuse someone of doing.

It was very enjoyable, though!

[henke37]

It is possible to forge finger prints already, and with the series set in the near future, I think that it is likely that they have figured out how to do it well.

Meph, you need to do a spell check, there was multiple embarrassing typos.

[Meph]

I'm glad you all liked it. Thanks for the suggestions.

Spoiler : :

I've fixed everything you've mentioned (except for the bits about the desk slam sounds and the whispering.)

I plan on getting this trial featured. I will be asking two people to review it for me, since it would be stupid if I reviewed it myself.