[T] Turnabout Carjack ★

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Re: Trial Showcase: Turnabout Carjack

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Sounds like a good trial. I withheld myself from playing it before you released Part 3, so I guess I'll play it later today. Expect a review in...9-12 hours.
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Re: ☆ Trial Showcase: Turnabout Carjack

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You will find that there's a transition in quality from Part 1 to Part 3.
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Re: ☆ Trial Showcase: Turnabout Carjack

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Image This trial is currently under a review to become a featured trial.

I have asked henke and Okappa to review the trial.

Henke says that the trial is fine, so I'm waiting on Okappa now.
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Re: ☆ Trial Showcase: Turnabout Carjack

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I suppose you can't review your own, otherwize you'd feature it yourself!
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Re: ☆ Trial Showcase: Turnabout Carjack

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Aceking v2 wrote:Image Will this star stay and hung Carjack up?
I have no idea what you mean. :)
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Re: ☆ Trial Showcase: Turnabout Carjack

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Translation: Will the trial be featured, who knows?
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Re: ☆ Trial Showcase: Turnabout Carjack

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I say that from what I saw, it is not excellent enough to be featured. It had typos and was weak on the sound effects.
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Re: ☆ Trial Showcase: Turnabout Carjack

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Well then why didn't you tell me that in the first place!?

Also, I'll need you to point out the typos, which is what you should do in a review. :)
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Re: ☆ Trial Showcase: Turnabout Carjack

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A review don't need to point out individual typos. It has to give the reader an understanding of what the reviewer thought about the reviewed material.
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Re: ☆ Trial Showcase: Turnabout Carjack

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henke37 is right. You should have been asking for beta-testing instead, in which that the beta-testers have to compile bug reports, grammatical errors, mistakes etc.
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Re: ☆ Trial Showcase: Turnabout Carjack

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When I "review" trials to feature them, it's not the sort of review that movie critics write. It's a list of every mistake and how to fix them.

In which parts were the typos and lack-of-sound-effects?
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Re: ☆ Trial: Turnabout Carjack

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I'm highly impressed Meph. That was a very interesting case, especially because murder wasn't the crime. I did see some spelling mistakes and some bugs (penalty bar doesn't stop flashing until a few frames later etc) however that shouldn't prevent this from becoming featured. You only have some general errors which all featured trials have and then, those creators fix them later when they were notified about them. I'm sure you can do the same.

Well done!
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Re: ☆ Trial Showcase: Turnabout Carjack

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Meph wrote:When I "review" trials to feature them, it's not the sort of review that movie critics write. It's a list of every mistake and how to fix them.

In which parts were the typos and lack-of-sound-effects?
Well, I suggest calling them beta testing to avid confusion. :wink:
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Re: ☆ Trial: Turnabout Carjack

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Tap wrote:I'm highly impressed Meph. That was a very interesting case, especially because murder wasn't the crime. I did see some spelling mistakes and some bugs (penalty bar doesn't stop flashing until a few frames later etc) however that shouldn't prevent this from becoming featured. You only have some general errors which all featured trials have and then, those creators fix them later when they were notified about them. I'm sure you can do the same.

Well done!
I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Since comments seem to be very positive, I will feature it. However, I would like help in removing all of the said imperfections. Could someone point them all out to me?
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Re: ☆ Trial: Turnabout Carjack

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Image The review is complete. This trial has become a featured trial.

I feel so chuffed that I finally have a featured trial of my own. XD
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