[C] Franziska vs Oldbag ●
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Re: Spoof Showcase: Franziska vs. Oldbag
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I think that the part at the end when Franziska says "Arrest her" needs a bit more lines from her.
It's not a vs. if one of the opponents doesn't say as much as the other one, right? (AKA. I'm saying that Franziska should have more lines.)
Other than that: it was good. Maybe it lacks some jokes, but it wasn't bad.
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I think that the part at the end when Franziska says "Arrest her" needs a bit more lines from her.
It's not a vs. if one of the opponents doesn't say as much as the other one, right? (AKA. I'm saying that Franziska should have more lines.)
Other than that: it was good. Maybe it lacks some jokes, but it wasn't bad.
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Re: Spoof Showcase: Franziska vs. Oldbag
I'll keep that in mind. It was only meant to be a short anyway.
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Re: Spoof Showcase: Franziska vs. Oldbag
Lol! That was pretty good. I have a suggestion though. On the add sound effects every 8 or letters, like the Kristoph-scream effect in 4-4. But on the whole, quite funny, and very good. Looking forward to the next installment!
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Re: Spoof Showcase: Franziska vs. Oldbag
I liked the abrupt ending though, it worked.
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Re: Spoof Showcase: Franziska vs. Oldbag
Yes, it was an important effect.
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Re: Spoof Showcase: Franziska vs. Oldbag
That was hilarious. I especially liked the use of that "Interesting People" theme from AAI. I would love to see these two in a real trial together.
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Re: Spoof Showcase: Franziska vs. Oldbag
Thanks.
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Re: Comedy: Franziska vs. Oldbag
Glad you liked it.
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Re: Comedy: Franziska vs. Oldbag
Well, if you want my opinion, it was funny seeing Oldbag being interrupted by Ms. Whipper. I really loved the ending...
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Re: Comedy: Franziska vs. Oldbag
pure awesome! it would've been alot more funny if franziska said, "SILENCE! i WHIP YOU!" like achmead. but i dont think you guys watch jeff dunham
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Re: Comedy: Franziska vs. Oldbag
*Pure Awesome.
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Re: Comedy: Franziska vs. Oldbag
Did you need to necro this post just to correct the typo of another member? Please don't spam.
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Re: Comedy: Franziska vs. Oldbag
Brilliant. xD
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Re: Comedy: Franziska vs. Oldbag
I wish I knew how you felt, because when you write a comedy, you're a lot calmer, if anything!
But thanks.
But thanks.
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