[C] Franziska vs Oldbag ●

[Filip1236]

(OK, time to tell Meph what I think of his trial!)

ˇSelect your answerˇ



I think that the part at the end when Franziska says "Arrest her" needs a bit more lines from her.
It's not a vs. if one of the opponents doesn't say as much as the other one, right? (AKA. I'm saying that Franziska should have more lines.)

Other than that: it was good. Maybe it lacks some jokes, but it wasn't bad.

[Meph]

I'll keep that in mind. It was only meant to be a short anyway.

[ShadowEdgeworth]

Lol! That was pretty good. I have a suggestion though. On the

Spoiler : :

QUIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!

add sound effects every 8 or letters, like the Kristoph-scream effect in 4-4. But on the whole, quite funny, and very good. Looking forward to the next installment!

[Powerdrone]

I liked the abrupt ending though, it worked.

[Meph]

Yes, it was an important effect.

[SuperGanondorf]

That was hilarious. I especially liked the use of that "Interesting People" theme from AAI. I would love to see these two in a real trial together.

[Meph]

Thanks.

[FlashFumo]

WOW! That ending!

[Meph]

Glad you liked it.

[Mimi]

Well, if you want my opinion, it was funny seeing Oldbag being interrupted by Ms. Whipper. I really loved the ending...

Spoiler : :

Franziska: Arrest her.

[LucasJay]

pure awesome! it would've been alot more funny if franziska said, "SILENCE! i WHIP YOU!" like achmead. but i dont think you guys watch jeff dunham

[Singapore123]

*Pure Awesome.

[Meph]

Did you need to necro this post just to correct the typo of another member? Please don't spam.

[MonocleClaire]

Brilliant. xD


"WHY DOESN'T SHE STOP?!"
"She never stops..."

I think I need a new stomach because I bust a gut laughing.

[Meph]

I wish I knew how you felt, because when you write a comedy, you're a lot calmer, if anything!

But thanks.