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Re: Trial: Secrets of a Turnabout

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Don't worry, I'm already on it. I've found a few things, although not as much as people seem to act like there is. The animation things are what stick out more.
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Re: Trial: Secrets of a Turnabout

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Spoiler : ERRORS :
It is intended, I am sure, but you always have "Mr." written as "Mr".

"If I don't get my client an aquittal" should be acquittal with a c.

Also, the courtroom view doesn't show any of the characters. It's more conspicuous now since everybody started using sprites for that part.

"It's time for me to make my leave." It sounds more natural if it's "take my leave."

The HOLD IT after that part doesn't shake the screen.

OBJECTION when Wright shows up doesn't shake the screen either.

"I wonder what Mr. Wright has founded." It should be found.

"You know how it's my speciality..." That should be specialty.

"Harley used one of Pekel's guns to commit the crime." After pressing this, there's a desk slam noise, but no animation for it.

Also, none of the HOLD ITs shake the screen. I'm starting to think you did that on purpose.

"However, if my client was the culprit, as the witness suggests, then there is a problem." Desk slam animation, but no noise.

After that part there's 3x gavel slam, but the noise is for 1.

"...then how was he able to open the evidence locker that it was stored in, Mr Justice? " Payne goes through his hair flip animation many times before this statement instead of just once.

Also btw I found Payne's bravery out of character. : P Haha.

Present the wrong evidence to proving the gun was from a previous trial and Payne does the hair flip many times again.

"Even the author is weary about the validity..." Payne says about the article. It's WARY, not weary. Weary is tired, exhausted, etc. Wary is suspicious.

"All facts are varified..." It should be verified, with an e.

"....." Harley has the talking animation during that silent blip when he's giving his name.

When the judge slams his gavel for Harley's testimony, there is no noise.

"That was my braclet." It's bracelet.

Also, it's not in the Court Record. :(

"You started blinking irraticly." After the perceive. It's "irratically."

"On the last page..." Apollo talking about the report after the perceive, it doesn't show his name.

"Now you're catching on..." Wright says after the alibi is mentioned. I missed it but I think the word acquittal is spelled wrong there too in the previous message.

"Are you crazy? We don't know how Giovanni will react." When they're talking about telling the judge about the rigged juries, Apollo's sprite is floating over the co-council background.
Aaaand done.
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Re: Trial: Secrets of a Turnabout

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Thanks. :) I've made all of the corrections that I could. I never realised how many mistakes I make when I rush to write down all of the thoughts in my head. :XD:
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Also, the courtroom view doesn't show any of the characters. It's more conspicuous now since everybody started using sprites for that part.
I'm waiting until AAO 6 is out before I do that.
Also, none of the HOLD ITs shake the screen. I'm starting to think you did that on purpose.
I'm waiting until the Sprite Correction Task Force fix it, because it will then happen automatically.
"...then how was he able to open the evidence locker that it was stored in, Mr Justice? " Payne goes through his hair flip animation many times before this statement instead of just once.
That's caused by a bug in Payne's start-up sprite. This will also be fixed by the SCTP.
Also btw I found Payne's bravery out of character. : P Haha.
Orly? :P
"Even the author is weary about the validity..." Payne says about the article. It's WARY, not weary. Weary is tired, exhausted, etc. Wary is suspicious.
I pronounce it as "weary". :(
Also, it's not in the Court Record.
It isn't in the court record in the real AA games, either.
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Re: Trial: Secrets of a Turnabout

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Oh wow, I didn't realize it. I'm just so used to the bracelet always being there. How strange.
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Actually, I've been rather irritated by the fact that it's in the court record in so many fancases. xD
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Well, it makes sense. The magatama is in there.
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Re: Trial: Secrets of a Turnabout

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The magatama wasn't in the court record in AJ:AA. It was made redundant by the new "special power" button that appears in the middle of the top bar in the bottom screen. ;)
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So, any updates on this? :P
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TwiGav wrote:So, any updates on this? :P
I'm pretty sure it's been dead for a while...
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It's not dead. I just haven't been working on it. I've been working on other AAO stuff, but I'll have time later in the year, provided that nothing else comes up.
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Played part 1. I like how you used 3D pictures. My only complaint is the lack of actual talking for Nathan. Felt very strange. Anyway, enjoying it so far~!
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Just read the description on page 1... "how could somebody die outside the courthouse?" I think you mean 'inside'.
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Re: Trial: Secrets of a Turnabout

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enigma wrote:Played part 1. I like how you used 3D pictures. My only complaint is the lack of actual talking for Nathan. Felt very strange. Anyway, enjoying it so far~!
I'm glad you liked it! I'm not sure what 3D images you mean, though.
Wolf Speaker wrote:Just read the description on page 1... "how could somebody die outside the courthouse?" I think you mean 'inside'.
Nope. The murder happened outside. :)
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Re: Trial: Secrets of a Turnabout

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Then maybe it would be better to write 'how could somebody die right outside' or 'near a courthouse', because it sounds really odd like that. (Because most murders occur outside of courthouses.)
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