[T][CE] Turnabout Tomorrow ★
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Re: [T][CE] Turnabout Tomorrow ●
So I wanted to be the first person to make a "I'll play Turnabout Tomorrow... TOMORROW!" joke.
And I just did.
So I am obligated to play this tomorrow... or later today. Whenever I finish ATTT I'll start, basically. ^^
And I just did.
So I am obligated to play this tomorrow... or later today. Whenever I finish ATTT I'll start, basically. ^^
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I'm stuck on testimony one, and I refuse to use a walkthrough.
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Valid points, most are explained later. You're on the right track with the first one.
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Alright.
You can have my stream of consciousness to laugh at now.
You can have my stream of consciousness to laugh at now.
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My life is complete now. :3
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So I'm not the only one who thought that a piece of evidence could be shown instead of a profile? Excellent.
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I have a stream-of-consiousness too, DWaM, but I'm going to post it in the comp thread once I finish judging xP
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For DWaM, about flashback.
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Hm... No, I actually like it the way it is. I understand that people might find it a bit... slow, but I think every line, relevant or not, can sorta add to a character, in a way. ^^"
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Or add to a slide-count...
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No offense.
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One way to look at it, I suppose.
In truth, I just don't like any short dialogue. To quote Evolina: "Everything in this trial is long." There's a reason for that - my style of writing just dictates that I make everything longer, regardless if it's dragging or not in reality.
[EDIT]: Also, added a walkthrough in the OP, because... well... Let's just say I found out just how far people came without a walkthrough. ^^"
In truth, I just don't like any short dialogue. To quote Evolina: "Everything in this trial is long." There's a reason for that - my style of writing just dictates that I make everything longer, regardless if it's dragging or not in reality.
[EDIT]: Also, added a walkthrough in the OP, because... well... Let's just say I found out just how far people came without a walkthrough. ^^"
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Re: [T][CE] Turnabout Tomorrow ●
Not my fault. Nope. Nuh-uh.DWaM wrote:One way to look at it, I suppose.
In truth, I just don't like any short dialogue. To quote Evolina: "Everything in this trial is long." There's a reason for that - my style of writing just dictates that I make everything longer, regardless if it's dragging or not in reality.
[EDIT]: Also, added a walkthrough in the OP, because... well... Let's just say I found out just how far people came without a walkthrough. ^^"
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Spoiler : Part One Report :
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After thinking it over, I have my theory.
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[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson