[T] The Empty Turnabout ●

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Okay, well, considering it's been a while I might as well just stop being pretentious about this and post it up:

The Original Conclusion to The Empty Turnabout

(This was written for Gumpei in mind since there was a thing at one point where he could help me out and whatnot, but never mind -- anyways: WARNING - there is language in this file! Please open at your own risk! ...Or just download it before Enth takes it down or something.)
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Well, I guess I only have one thing to say...
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It took a whole year

But yes

Yes you did

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wtf DWaM, there is no cookie
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you just can't see it because it's made of pure white crack
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dam u len
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DWaM wrote:Okay, well, considering it's been a while I might as well just stop being pretentious about this and post it up:

The Original Conclusion to The Empty Turnabout

(This was written for Gumpei in mind since there was a thing at one point where he could help me out and whatnot, but never mind -- anyways: WARNING - there is language in this file! Please open at your own risk! ...Or just download it before Enth takes it down or something.)
Huh, I really liked this conclusion better than the real ending, not saying I didn't like the final product, just that I think the original conclusion fills in more gaps and adds character, plus I find it more interesting and funny... (She ATE the gun?!)
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I like this case! It's well written.
What really I enjoyed the most, though, it was the humor you put in it. I enjoyed it here more most than all other trails you did.
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I mean, the entire case is so dark, and yet, the jokes fit so well in this and don't ruin the atmosphere at all.

Psycho Athena is my favourite character, she's the "crazy villain" for the most part, but man she's hilarious sometimes. When she brought up that testimony from AA4 i lost it, i don't know why, maybe because it was unexpected, and while reading i was like "WTH is she talking about?"
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Ok so I'm just gonna say that I just beat the case and I'm honestly torn. What happened!? Is there something I missed? Could you pm me explaining things?
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Just finished a replay of this case, thoroughly enjoyed it (again)!

Could you perhaps update the dropbox link for the original ending? I'd really like to see it :D
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DWaM (or anyone else who knows the answer), what's the song that plays when Marston steps up to the witness stand? It's super epic.
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Recreation from Virtue's Last Reward plays when he gives his testimony.
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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No, Enthalpy. I was referring to the song that plays the moment Marston appears on the stand. See this game save where it plays:
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Dark Knight by DYATHON

For reference, you can look at the editor page for any released trial by going to the URL directly. It's quite useful for looking things like this up.
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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