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Wow... When did writing a trial become so lame and tryhard? 

Message par keyz05 » Mer Sep 26, 2018 7:15 am

No offense. But a lot of newbies for this case making system really try a subpar job of getting their story done. They try to act like their a pro at writing, but then they suck at it because they don't have the correct resources for getting the trial done. Isn't that super lame or what?
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Re: Wow... When did writing a trial become so lame and tryha 

Message par energizerspark » Dim Sep 30, 2018 2:01 pm

are you aware that YOUR trial links both go to a 404 page
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Re: Wow... When did writing a trial become so lame and tryha 

Message par enigma » Lun Oct 08, 2018 12:56 pm

keyz05 a écrit :No offense., Bbut a lot of newbies for at this case-making system really try do a subpar job of getting their story done(? Are you saying that they fail to complete their stories or that their stories don't convey their themes and messages well. Very unclear.). They try to and act like their they're a pros at writing, but then they suck at it (unnecessary indicator) because they don't have the correct resources (please specify what you mean by resources) for getting their trial done (Do you mean completing the trial?) Isn't that super lame or what?


A good effort, but could definitely do with some polishing. Remember, if you want to sound professional in writing, it is always suggested to edit, proofread and re-edit. I feel your message would have more impact if you reduced the level of slang terminology (newbies is very casual, and lame isn't very compelling) and focused on making your argument clearer. Hope that helps!
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Re: Wow... When did writing a trial become so lame and tryha 

Message par drvonkitty » Mar Oct 09, 2018 3:05 am

April 13, 2012
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Re: Wow... When did writing a trial become so lame and tryha 

Message par enigma » Ven Oct 12, 2018 6:44 am

It was going downhill from April 2011, don't flatter yourself
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Message par kwando1313 » Ven Oct 12, 2018 7:00 am

Um y'all, it clearly was downhill after 2008, smdh




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