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Hi people!!
This is CPY! LOL!!
I've always like writing and making graphics. Tho I'm not great at both, i decided, why not put them together, maybe they can make up for each other Therefore, I've finally decided to make a sprite comic (well, not really "sprite" comic because I haven't really make them into sprites and I probably won't) base on an abandoned old case. It's actually a sequel to a fanfic I wrote.
Background
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This story occurs in the Forbidden City. 4 guards were found poison to death...
What to expect
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-Murder (Yes, people die)
-Hatred
-3rd person/random view (unlike the AA games, you're viewing from a particular character's POV. Just take it as you're looking at screen caps of a show rather than AA game.)
What NOT to expect
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-A lot of Court Scenes
-A lot of Investigation
-Concubines breaking each others' throat
I can't think now ... If there's anything else, I'll edit and add
THANKS
Thanks to DefenceLawyer, the author of Robert Civil: Ace Attorney Sprite Comic for taking the trouble to provide the necessary images for making sprite comics. They helped jump-start things. Thanks for making creating sprite comics a lot easier.
Character Profiles:
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Emperor
Address as "Your Majesty", "YongYan" (his given name) or "Yan" in this story.
There is only one person that can call him by his given name.
Eunuch Bi
Address as "Bi Gong Gong", "Eunuch Bi" or "Xiao Bi Zi" in this story.
Xiao Bi Zi is usually call by the master/mistress (in this case, the emberor).
Others have to address him by "Bi Gong Gong" or "Eunuch Bi" out of respect.
Royal Concubine JiaXuan
Address as "Royal Concubine JiaXuan" (respectful way of addressing), "Concubine JiaXuan" (when there's a typo LOL) or "JiaXuan" (given name) in this story.
Only the emperor call her by her given name.
Concubine ShiYun
Address as "Concubine ShiYun" (respectful way of addressing), "ShiYun" (given name) in this story.
Concubine FuZhen
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How is it so far? I know things are a little slow.
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Thanks for reading.
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Last edited by tiancai on Sat Dec 24, 2016 7:58 pm, edited 36 times in total.
Very promising.
You could include some notes that explain culture-specific things in the future, though. Mainly "why the emperor calls Eunuch Bi 'Xiao Bi Zi' ". Remember that we don't all have knowledge of Chinese customs.
DeeYo wrote:Very promising.
You could include some notes that explain culture-specific things in the future, though. Mainly "why the emperor calls Eunuch Bi 'Xiao Bi Zi' ". Remember that we don't all have knowledge of Chinese customs.
I guess, you're right! Thanks for the great suggestion!
I'll add a character profile as the character appears.
Hey, that's pretty interesting, I'll be reading.
It's disturbing that the characters all have *very similar* faces though, the 3 women on the banner are only distinguishable by the color of their dress.
Maybe that's the point, but I'd think maybe you want to spend more efforts on future chara-designs.
I moved the image to another folder as I uploaded it to the wrong folder, hence the link got broken.
It should be working now ...
Kroki wrote:Hey, that's pretty interesting, I'll be reading.
It's disturbing that the characters all have *very similar* faces though, the 3 women on the banner are only distinguishable by the color of their dress.
Maybe that's the point, but I'd think maybe you want to spend more efforts on future chara-designs.
Thanks for reading!! It means a lot!!
That's true, I used the same base for all female characters and I must admit, I suffer badly from "same-face syndrome".
I just have a certain kind of look that I like and I am kinda stuck with that.
But no excuse , I'll put in more effort into character design in future.