Ask please before using something please? Also I'm really slow at doing stuff so yeah.
Channing Fey(Animated by ApolloGrimoire)
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Maybe it's the glasses, or the colour of hair, i don't know to be honest.E.D.Revolution wrote:Why does Margaret Jing remind me of Luis hawk?
Margaret's pointing doesn't quite have impact. I dunno, it's probably the angle of the pointer being outward (her body), downward and away as opposed to upward and towards a person.
The desk slam... Have you tried to make the actual slamming vertical and straight? The inward slamming... doesn't seem to convey impact.
This is a design question: Why does Margaret have headphones on? You'd think that'd be a no-no for court.
Another design/storyline question: Why does Channing Fey have the green magatama?
Most of your sprites have pillow-shading, which is a no-no for spriting. I can't explain what pillow-shading is succinctly, so I'll let someone else explain it.
Before you do that, please study how to draw the human torso. I mentioned this earlier... but though Margaret may be an old sprite, the problems are still present in the nurse sprite as well. A lack of anatomical fundamentals is still your greatest weakness at this time, and the torso is the most important in Ace Attorney sprites (following the face, which is good) - any other criticism I can give you would not even come close to how much this one thing cripples your great rendering ability.Hesseldahl wrote:Yeah I know, I'm going probably to do a second version of her for fixing all the problems with her.
Yes please!mercurialSK wrote:Before you do that, please study how to draw the human torso. I mentioned this earlier... but though Margaret may be an old sprite, the problems are still present in the nurse sprite as well. A lack of anatomical fundamentals is still your greatest weakness at this time, and the torso is the most important in Ace Attorney sprites (following the face, which is good) - any other criticism I can give you would not even come close to how much this one thing cripples your great rendering ability.Hesseldahl wrote:Yeah I know, I'm going probably to do a second version of her for fixing all the problems with her.
If you're not sure why, I can do a redline for you.
Eh, don't worry about it. The best way would be to try improving.Hesseldahl wrote:How can I return you the favor?
Thanks!mercurialSK wrote:Sorry for the delay.
Spoiler : :Eh, don't worry about it. The best way would be to try improving.Hesseldahl wrote:How can I return you the favor?
Well the thing is that the design it's not mine, these are for someone in Deviantart.Lind wrote:Good design, however the torso is abnormally long. Should probably shrink down a little.