[CE][M] Mystery in Mitakihara ○
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[CE][M] Mystery in Mitakihara ○
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Re: [CE][M] Mystery in Mitakihara ○
I just played this and that was...very short, actually. I guess that this trial is still incomplete...?
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♂ + ♂ = ♥
♀ + ♀ = ♥
♀ + ♂ = ♥
Love should be genderless.
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♀ + ♀ = ♥
♀ + ♂ = ♥
Love should be genderless.
If you agree, please add this to your signature.
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Re: [CE][M] Mystery in Mitakihara ○
It's currently incomplete, yes. That's why it's an open circle...
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Re: [CE][M] Mystery in Mitakihara ○
Ah, alright then. I honestly hadn't noticed the circle in the title of the thread...for some reason I had gotten the impression this would be complete from the posts I had seen in the competition thread.
♂ + ♂ = ♥
♀ + ♀ = ♥
♀ + ♂ = ♥
Love should be genderless.
If you agree, please add this to your signature.
♀ + ♀ = ♥
♀ + ♂ = ♥
Love should be genderless.
If you agree, please add this to your signature.
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Re: [CE][M] Mystery in Mitakihara ○
MiM's got a lot of potential, but this first chapter is PRETTY bare-bones, although I can definitely overlook that because the mechanic you're going with seems fairly complicated. Although, a couple issues.
Spoiler : it was literally a couple but then i added a third :
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Re: [CE][M] Mystery in Mitakihara ○
Alrighty, finished it:
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Re: [CE][M] Mystery in Mitakihara ○
DWaM wrote:Spoiler : Thoughts :
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"With good friends by your side, anything is possible. If you really care for each other, it makes everyone stronger! Then you'll have the will to succeed! The world is filled with painful things, it's sad sometimes, and you won't be able to handle it by yourself. But just know: If there's someone that you love, you'll stay on the right path. And you won't ever give in! As long as you keep that person in your heart, you'll keep getting back up. Understand? That's why a Hero never loses!"
Miki by Hershey's Chocolate Bars.
Miki by Hershey's Chocolate Bars.
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Re: [CE][M] Mystery in Mitakihara ○
Well, true, but when dealing with anything that takes place in a universe or features characters of another franchise in general, the set-up is really important. I was aware this was an inverse, but considering you two worked on BondS, it was the closest comparison I could think of to illustrate that point. I should've made that a bit more clear, admittedly.
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Re: [CE][M] Mystery in Mitakihara ○
I'll be streaming this in a few minutes, for anybody who wants to watch! You can consider this my substitute for a review, though I'll post the key points here.
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Re: [CE][M] Mystery in Mitakihara ○
@Reecer:
I'll fix the bugs as soon as the unfreeze on editing happens for comp.
@DWaM:
Glad to hear you enjoyed it ^^
@Enthalpy:
Sorry I missed the stream. ^^
Hope you enjoyed it though?
I'll fix the bugs as soon as the unfreeze on editing happens for comp.
@DWaM:
Glad to hear you enjoyed it ^^
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Sorry I missed the stream. ^^
Hope you enjoyed it though?
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Re: [CE][M] Mystery in Mitakihara ○
Spoiler : Regarding DWaM's Comment :
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[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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Re: [CE][M] Mystery in Mitakihara ○
ohey this is a thing i made
I'll hopefully be doing work on this again soon!
I'll hopefully be doing work on this again soon!
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Re: [CE][M] Mystery in Mitakihara ○
i don't know just some guy i guess
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