[T] [C] [CE] Turnabout Allergies ●

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[T] [C] [CE] Turnabout Allergies ●

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Allergies are a pain in the butt, some people are allergic to pollen while others are allergic to peanuts. The point is, allergies are everywhere. If you have allergies, you should go to the doctor and get a check-up. I personally do have tons of allergies, so there's that. I don't know where I'm going with this to be honest.

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This is an entry for the ticking time bomb comp. There are indeed co-counsel conversations and press statements now and some of the other issues were also addressed.

Note this is my first trial and is meant to be experimental. This was me just going ahead and making a whole case from scratch while trying to learn the editor in the process.

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Might have to give this a replay to see the newly added co-counsel conversations and press statements. Anyway this was a silly nonsense comedy trial with some funny jokes, we could use more of those. Give it a play if you like random humor, it's rather short and moves at a nice pace so the jokes don't grow stale. Also the prosecutor's fun.

Oh also Spoonmaster, you should probably mark this as a comedy with the [C] tag in the thread title, though I think the description does give people a good idea of what tone to expect.
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I also recommend this. Nice job going through and adding that stuff, as well. Did a quick runthrough. My opinion on the presentation (especially the dialogue boxes that are too long and extend upwards) is mostly the same, although you did clean it up a lot. It's still a fun, silly trial that's easy enough to finish in a few minutes. Worth most people's time.
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I didn't like any of the jokes of the creator shitting on themselves/calling themselves cringe in this case. It is very irritating. I think otherwise it is silly and I hope you make more.
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When I first saw the title of this case, I thought it was going to be a "you're going to die if you don't get an EpiPen in twenty minutes! Hurry!" thing.

What I got was still pretty good.

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risefromtheashes wrote: Wed Jan 11, 2023 3:58 am When I first saw the title of this case, I thought it was going to be a "you're going to die if you don't get an EpiPen in twenty minutes! Hurry!" thing.

What I got was still pretty good.

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Maybe in the sequel :o
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