trialdude wrote: ↑Wed Jan 27, 2021 7:00 pm My two cents on the twists:Spoiler : :I totally understand why some might get blindsided by the reveals, but for what it’s worth, I predicted both twists.
I'm glad you were able to! In hindsight, the reveals did come in relatively quick succession, so maybe that's why people were overwhelmed.
I thought the foreshadowing was excellent, and it made solving the motive cross-exam really satisfying.
I know what you mean, I always get a rush of excitement whenever I guess a plot twist in a fancase in advance! I'm glad the twists stuck the landing for you.
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I finished playing this case. Full thoughts will have to wait until after the QA review I'm signed up for, but I'll say now that
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I started typing up my thoughts on the case. But with a case this big, (7925 frames) I'll burn myself out if I try to talk about everything. I can talk about my thoughts on the gameplay section, but it's the story-side that I find more interesting. Can you talk about what you were going for in some more detail?
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Enthalpy wrote: ↑Sun Feb 28, 2021 2:14 am I started typing up my thoughts on the case. But with a case this big, (7925 frames) I'll burn myself out if I try to talk about everything. I can talk about my thoughts on the gameplay section, but it's the story-side that I find more interesting. Can you talk about what you were going for in some more detail?Spoiler : :
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OK, finally played more of this case! Up to Day 2: Investigation Part 2 now.
I admit, I used a walkthrough only because I was conscious of time.
I gotta say overall I've loved this case so far. Such a unique idea, such a large amount of detail put into your first case it just impressed me a lot. I also like the idea of the HICMED and kinda want to make a one-liner reference to it in my fan game XD (If that's OK with you).
Some little inconsistencies to fix:
I admit, I used a walkthrough only because I was conscious of time.
I gotta say overall I've loved this case so far. Such a unique idea, such a large amount of detail put into your first case it just impressed me a lot. I also like the idea of the HICMED and kinda want to make a one-liner reference to it in my fan game XD (If that's OK with you).
Some little inconsistencies to fix:
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Thanks for playing! My responses are in red.SuperAj3 wrote: ↑Mon Mar 01, 2021 1:22 pm OK, finally played more of this case! Up to Day 2: Investigation Part 2 now.
I admit, I used a walkthrough only because I was conscious of time.
I gotta say overall I've loved this case so far. Such a unique idea, such a large amount of detail put into your first case it just impressed me a lot. I also like the idea of the HICMED and kinda want to make a one-liner reference to it in my fan game XD (If that's OK with you).
Thank you, and yep, that's OK with me.
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And unsurprisingly, as I started writing, my plans changed, so let's start with something simpler.
Let me know if you need me to give another example, or have other questions/comments.
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Thanks for waiting - it's been a hectic few days for me. Anyways.
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I started playing this case last night because I was really interested in the premise, and it sucked me in so quickly that I played the entire thing in one go, keeping me up until one in the morning. I'm really invested in the worldbuilding you did; there's so much to potentially explore with this concept!
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Thanks for playing! My responses are in red.ikuzonos wrote: ↑Tue Apr 27, 2021 8:08 pm I started playing this case last night because I was really interested in the premise, and it sucked me in so quickly that I played the entire thing in one go, keeping me up until one in the morning. I'm really invested in the worldbuilding you did; there's so much to potentially explore with this concept!Spoiler : :
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How many chapters are there in RE 4?
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