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Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2014 11:43 pm
by JinniaFlyer450
Nearavex wrote:That light violet skin and hair are scary.

Also, Evo, I hope you know what you're doing, because that silhouette's head feels anatomically incorrect already xD

Scary in a good way or a bad way? Because I know I'm still very much an amateur.

Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2014 11:38 am
by ~Dataman~
Here's something that I made. :)
I shall present: April May's big sister! I though since the original character seems to be based on the stereotype of "cute sexy", it'd be easy to edit into something else. As you can see, this is a darker and sliiightly more mature little lady. And hair straighter hair. In my opinion, the original was stupid.
I may make a whole set out of this, since I liked making these few. :D
Adrienne May shall be the name. She isn't a secretary like her sister, but likes physical activities more.
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Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2014 12:04 pm
by Nearavex
I'd rather go for a cousin by the name of June July =D

(Also, I feel something is wrong about her face for some reason.)

...I just now imagined April's grandfather by the name of August September. It kinda has a military feel to it, somehow.

Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2014 1:10 pm
by ~Dataman~
Yeah, I would have gone with that, but now that I didn't, I think I can't go back anymore.
The face may look strange because I made few differences to the original, like different eyes, chin and hair.

Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2014 10:27 pm
by Topaz
DeeYo wrote:
Nearavex wrote:Also, Evo, I hope you know what you're doing, because that silhouette's head feels anatomically incorrect already xD
The person is wearing a hat.
No, clearly they're a mushroom.

Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2014 3:50 pm
by Nearavex
I meant what's under the hat.

Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2014 6:50 am
by DragonTrainer
Gregory Edgeworth II, Miles Edgeworth's Son

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Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2014 2:40 pm
by Nearavex
...his head is scary. It's almost as if Edgeworth was impregnated by aliens. His head is just unnaturally big.

It's about third entry I criticized - I should stop.

Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2014 3:04 pm
by Broocevelt
The head is not big at all. The hair gives you that impression, but the proportions are ok.

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Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2014 3:34 pm
by enigma
Introducing...
Easel Stickler: Wesley Stickler's Teacher Father!

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Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2014 5:57 pm
by TheDoctor
DragonTrainer wrote:Gregory Edgeworth II, Miles Edgeworth's Son

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Perhaps if you were to use Young!Edgeworth's hair instead, it might help keep the head from looking quite so huge.

Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2014 3:51 am
by DragonTrainer
How does he look now?

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Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2014 4:05 am
by TheDoctor
Much better. Good job. (heck, change the necktie to a bowtie, and we could have some good Child!Edgeworth sprites on our hands)

Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2014 4:49 pm
by Hesseldahl
Cambrio DeLite or Mask☆DeMasque Son(Child of Ron Delite and Desirée DeLite)
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Re: Official AAO Competition - Everything is Relative

Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2014 5:14 pm
by Broocevelt
I really like this one! The only complaint I have is the length of his left arm in the first sprite; it appears to be much shorter than it should.

Otherwise, creativity speaking, this is awesome! (I also love the fact that he's got blue badger despite the fact he's the son of a master thief xP)