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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby FenrirDarkWolf » Fri Oct 22, 2010 7:05 am

This was real quickly:
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That's Diego Armando, Buddy Faith for AAI case 1, Drew Misham, the Judge and Winston Payne.
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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby LunchPolice » Fri Oct 22, 2010 7:53 am

Why is the version in your avatar taller?
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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby Dypo deLina » Fri Oct 22, 2010 8:06 am

I'm guessing he made the width tinier, and the left the height as it was.
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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby FenrirDarkWolf » Sun Oct 24, 2010 4:33 am

UPDATE:Last one of Lil's sprites (sad):
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Decided to move the hands.
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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby Dypo deLina » Sun Oct 24, 2010 12:04 pm

I think you need to add shading around the, um, "chest" area.
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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby Singapore123 » Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:43 pm

The arms look short.
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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby FenrirDarkWolf » Thu Oct 28, 2010 2:52 am

UPDATE: Me again: Image
EDIT: Nick vs. Lana: Image
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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby Singapore123 » Thu Oct 28, 2010 11:28 am

Nice.
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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby E.D.Revolution » Thu Oct 28, 2010 10:43 pm

Diego, I don't think you understand. Use the PW VS sprite on CR. Then make sure they are centered more in the end. Make the animation fast and smooth, like a speeding truck coming to a halt, but still moving a little bit before the end. Match my avatar's scroll in speed and progression to get a sense on how fast and smooth it should be. Oh, and if you can edit Mia's VS sprite (base on CR) to make it fit Lana, then great. Otherwise, stick to your Lana VS sprite.

(You messed up on PW. Lana was ok, Henke put you in the wrong direction. You can blame him later)
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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby FenrirDarkWolf » Fri Oct 29, 2010 2:42 am

Is this any better? Image
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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby SwagmaWampyr » Fri Oct 29, 2010 2:43 am

I can't find anything wrong with it, but maybe I'm missing something...
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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby E.D.Revolution » Fri Oct 29, 2010 2:48 am

I don't know how to describe it. The standard VS screen goes fast and asymptotes to slow then stops. Yours... well it kinda oscillates between fast and slow... it seems that way. It looks rushed at the end. Why don't you move your characters much closer the second frame after your characters appears? Same for the third frame after they appear. Work from there, and it'll be smoothed out.
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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby FenrirDarkWolf » Fri Oct 29, 2010 4:40 am

How's this? Image
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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby E.D.Revolution » Fri Oct 29, 2010 4:47 am

You're using a lot of frames. How many in that .gif?
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Re: Diego's Sprites 

Postby FenrirDarkWolf » Fri Oct 29, 2010 5:12 am

Less Frames! Image
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