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Trial Showcase: Times and Turnabouts: Turnabout Revived

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Hi Everyone

I've completed the first half of the first case of my fangame, Phoenix Wright: Times and Turnabouts.

Synopsis: After retrieving his Attorney's Badge after 8 years, Phoenix defends Maggey Byrde who has been accused of murder yet again. The Prosecutor is Winston Payne, and will feature characters from previous GS games. Contains spoilers for 1-1.

Trial Former: http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=6976 (Now fixed of the errors that henke37 noticed.)

Trial Latter: Coming Soon.

I hope you enjoy my first trial here!
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Re: Trial Showcase: Times and Turnabouts: Turnabout Revived

Post by henke37 »

It's been a while, but I think it's time to do one of my flawlists this time.
Spoiler : gameplay :
  • I think you switched the introduction statements for the gun and the photo around.
  • Issues with the auto voice feature.
  • It's not a good idea to open with a literal bang, it kinda doesn't sound too well.
  • There is no need to not use the right icon for the Autopsy Report.
  • You seem to have screwed up the start point of the crossexamination. The fancy logo goes before the block, not in it.
  • Obvious time contradiction is obvious, yet presenting the autopsy report is not acknowledged.
  • There are two hold it sound effects on line 94 and 95, 108 and 109. One is enough.
  • That's not a machinegun, why even suggest that it is one? I don't think it would make any importance. Besides, machineguns must be quite heavy and hard to just wave around.
  • Frame 110 has the wrong background
  • Extremely poorly done objection on frames 118 to 119
  • More than once does a fancy text cover the wrong person.
  • I could have sworn that we did have the harmonica in the stock sound effects sine some time.
  • Thank you for showing how the new layer engine breaks the layout.
Overall poor implementation, but hey, at least you didn't butch the grammar!
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Re: Trial Showcase: Times and Turnabouts: Turnabout Revived

Post by omega-xis »

Hey, this ain't that bad, pal. You say this is your first time? Yeah, it was pretty good. :pearlhappy:
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