Apollo Justice: The new Journey (New poll please vote!)

[Powerdaan]

I have just posted the intro to my new trial (or better adventure) of apollo Justice.
My English is not that good because i'm dutch.
If you have any ideas or maybe comments please tell me!
Greetz, Powerdaan

Edit: Here is the linkhttp://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=2898

Edit2: I just put up a poll so vote please

Edit3: Second poll up! Results of first poll: Pearly

Edit4: Third poll up! Result of the second poll: Investigation/Something Else

NEVER MIND THIS!
I'm hereby locking this topic.... cause I'm working to much for school and lost my idea (word file) when doing something on my comp....

[RandomJibberish]

It looks pretty interesting...

A few things:

Where the hell did Maya come from? And shouldn't she look older? Also, is it just my crappy computer, or are there no backgrounds?

Some of the characters were a little out of characer, but it's not bad.

Also, there were a few grammatical errors, but I don't blame you if you aren't a native speaker

[AntiRoyalty]

2. Include a link to your trial in the post. It's a lot more convenient than having us sift through the huge page full of trials just to critique yours.

Just a friendly reminder from your friendly native poster.

... *waits patiently for the link to be up, yes, I'm that lazy*

[Dramatica]

2. Include a link to your trial in the post. It's a lot more convenient than having us sift through the huge page full of trials just to critique yours.

Just a friendly reminder from your friendly native poster.

... *waits patiently for the link to be up, yes, I'm that lazy*

That would be my reply, if my computer wasn't zetta slow right now.

*waits*

[Forcemaster]

2. Include a link to your trial in the post. It's a lot more convenient than having us sift through the huge page full of trials just to critique yours.

Just a friendly reminder from your friendly native poster.

... *waits patiently for the link to be up, yes, I'm that lazy*

She stole mah job!

[Dramatica]

Laziness for All!

[Powerdaan]

The link is here: http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=2898
Where Maya comes from will be explained later
And I checked but there are backgrounds!

Greetz,

[RandomJibberish]

Ahh, yes, It does have backgrounds.

Anyhow, If you would like an older looking maya, by all means use the ones in my sprite thread (With credit, of course )

[Powerdaan]

I have some new news.
In the first episode (case) there is someone you don't expect returning.
Pearly also makes an appearance.

Greetz, Powerdaan

[Powerdaan]

I've put up a poll so please vote

[Dramatica]

What? No Machi?

I kid.

[Dj_Zao]

Tough choice in the poll... between Pearly and Franny... at the end I choose Pearly...

[Powerdaan]

What? No Machi?

I kid.

Machi will have an appearance
Everyone in the poll will have at least one appearance:D

[RandomJibberish]

He meant no Machi in the poll, as his favourite chracter (If that emphasises it enough...) is Machi and he wanted him as a major character

It was a joke, though.

[Dramatica]

Yes it was.

I fanboy FAR too much over Machi.