[T] A Turnabout On Rails ● (Privated for edits)
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Re: [T] A Turnabout On Rails ☆
Played through this case to completion, and thoroughly enjoyed it! There were some presentation hiccups (mostly related to fades/lack thereof), but overall I thought it was fun! Definitely give it a try if you haven't.
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My trials: Paint Ghosts Over Everything, Fragments of a Turnabout, Last Chance for Turnabout, The Illogical Turnabout
My trials: Paint Ghosts Over Everything, Fragments of a Turnabout, Last Chance for Turnabout, The Illogical Turnabout
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Re: [T] A Turnabout On Rails ☆
I apologize for the extremely long wait. To make a long story short, I've been having some personal issues since April that dramatically intensified about a week after receiving the review request. While they're not completely resolved, they're no longer as consuming.
I should hopefully be able to get back to the review. I'm doing some traveling this week, which may afford me time to resume the review. Regardless, expect an update from me next Sunday.
I should hopefully be able to get back to the review. I'm doing some traveling this week, which may afford me time to resume the review. Regardless, expect an update from me next Sunday.
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Re: [T] A Turnabout On Rails ☆
Take as long as you need. I'm not in a hurry to get this case reviewed, seeing as I'm working on an entry for the Takumiverse case competition right now, and I totally understand any extenuating circumstances.Enthalpy wrote: ↑Sat Aug 26, 2023 11:58 pm I apologize for the extremely long wait. To make a long story short, I've been having some personal issues since April that dramatically intensified about a week after receiving the review request. While they're not completely resolved, they're no longer as consuming.
I should hopefully be able to get back to the review. I'm doing some traveling this week, which may afford me time to resume the review. Regardless, expect an update from me next Sunday.
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This is (overall) a pretty fun case, albeit rough around the edges. I enjoyed playing though each part (mostly, will get to that later) and am excited to play another case by this creator. With that being said, here are some specific overall thoughts about each case, with any bugs/critical specific points DM'd to CodingAnt separately:
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Spoiler : Investigation :
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Spoiler : Part 3 :
Spoiler : All parts :
Thrower of bricks.
Co-host of the Into the Takumi-verse case compeition.
Stuff I've made in 2 weeks:
The Impossible Turnabout
Erinaceinae Griminance
Cases I have collabed on:
Don't Resort to a Turnabout (W.I.P)
Trucy's Magical Catastrophe
That time I got reincarnated as a fictional Defence Lawyer in An Ace Attorney fangame and had to defend myself against incredibly unfair odds.
Stuff I've made by myself that is good:
...maybe in the future.
Co-host of the Into the Takumi-verse case compeition.
Stuff I've made in 2 weeks:
The Impossible Turnabout
Erinaceinae Griminance
Cases I have collabed on:
Don't Resort to a Turnabout (W.I.P)
Trucy's Magical Catastrophe
That time I got reincarnated as a fictional Defence Lawyer in An Ace Attorney fangame and had to defend myself against incredibly unfair odds.
Stuff I've made by myself that is good:
...maybe in the future.
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Re: [T] A Turnabout On Rails ☆
Thank you for giving this a shot! (And thanks for the very detailed review, holy moly.) I'll do my best to go through this with my own comments, and see if I can address any improvements I could make.DeathByAutoscroll wrote: ↑Thu Aug 31, 2023 7:29 pm This is (overall) a pretty fun case, albeit rough around the edges. I enjoyed playing though each part (mostly, will get to that later) and am excited to play another case by this creator. With that being said, here are some specific overall thoughts about each case, with any bugs/critical specific points DM'd to CodingAnt separately:
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Spoiler : As this entire reply is excessively long, it has been hidden in this spoiler tag for those scrolling in the future. :
Thrower of bricks.
Co-host of the Into the Takumi-verse case compeition.
Stuff I've made in 2 weeks:
The Impossible Turnabout
Erinaceinae Griminance
Cases I have collabed on:
Don't Resort to a Turnabout (W.I.P)
Trucy's Magical Catastrophe
That time I got reincarnated as a fictional Defence Lawyer in An Ace Attorney fangame and had to defend myself against incredibly unfair odds.
Stuff I've made by myself that is good:
...maybe in the future.
Co-host of the Into the Takumi-verse case compeition.
Stuff I've made in 2 weeks:
The Impossible Turnabout
Erinaceinae Griminance
Cases I have collabed on:
Don't Resort to a Turnabout (W.I.P)
Trucy's Magical Catastrophe
That time I got reincarnated as a fictional Defence Lawyer in An Ace Attorney fangame and had to defend myself against incredibly unfair odds.
Stuff I've made by myself that is good:
...maybe in the future.
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Re: [T] A Turnabout On Rails ☆
Okay, finished playing the case! Next is writing the review.
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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QA Review: A Turnabout on Rails
Hopefully not anybody on this forum, or else I should go hide.
Hopefully not anybody on this forum, or else I should go hide.
This is CodingAnt's first trial, and it clocks in at 5861 frames. I've remarked before that first cases are often wild cards. So how did this trial go? Answers below.
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As I find myself doing more and more lately, I'm avoiding my usual check mark system.Spoiler : Check #1: Here Be Spoilers! :
Spoiler : Check #2 :
Spoiler : VERDICT :
[D]isordered speech is not so much injury to the lips that give it forth, as to the disproportion and incoherence of things in themselves, so negligently expressed. ~ Ben Jonson
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Thank you for taking the time to write this! I feel like I learned a lot about my own writing shortcomings, and hopefully I can improve upon them in my next cases as well as when editing this one.Enthalpy wrote: ↑Fri Sep 29, 2023 9:47 pmQA Review: A Turnabout on Rails
Hopefully not anybody on this forum, or else I should go hide.
This is CodingAnt's first trial, and it clocks in at 5861 frames. I've remarked before that first cases are often wild cards. So how did this trial go? Answers below.
_____________________________________________________As I find myself doing more and more lately, I'm avoiding my usual check mark system.
Spoiler : Check #1: Here Be Spoilers! :Spoiler : Check #2 :Spoiler : VERDICT :
Spoiler : Response (I got a little excited so it's kinda long) :