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CodingAnt wrote: ↑Sat Mar 16, 2024 10:54 am
Played this on a whim in about half an hour. It's a cute, heartwarming little short story, and I liked it a lot! The presentation especially was on-point. I would recommend this to anyone with a few minutes to spare who's a fan of feeling emotions.
smiles gently I'm glad you enjoyed
DJJ6800 wrote: ↑Sat Mar 16, 2024 4:52 pm
I really like MYMBaB. You should check it out too.
Hehe, my case has a better acronym than yours, Astrik. Gotcha there at least
smiles, my acronym has "BAB" in it because everyone is baby. Take that!
Glad you enjoyed.
DeathByAutoscroll wrote: ↑Sat Mar 16, 2024 5:05 pm
Played this, and leaving feedback at request.
This is an emotionally charged and developed story both from the outset of it's opening, all the way through to the conclusion. These emotions are conducted to play a synthony on the heartstrings by the excellent writing, accompanied by the phenominal presentation. Immediately the setting is well established, and characters well defined through their thoughts, facial expressions, and awkward smalltalk (/positive) to help them cope with the situation they're going through before the writing takes over and soon what was known about what is going on gets flipped and twisted like an hourglass turned carnival ride as the sounds of the player's heartstrings becomes a chorus of ever changing emotions. It is also super gay and girlbossy.
Other notes: The presentation is cleverly done; with the differentiation between what is being shown in the past and what is being said in the future, the sprites being extremely well cast (that final callback joke sent me), and the clean graphical edits for some graphics. Overall: A masterfully crafted experience of positive note that unfortunately missed out on potentially performing extremely well for the Year of Luigi competition.
This is genuinely some of the most positive feedback I've ever had to anything I've written. Jesus Christ. All of the things I was proudest about -- presentation, custom graphics, use of facial expressions, characters being distinct -- and you singled every single one of them out. Thank you so much.
Also, girlboss!
Samallama wrote: ↑Sat Mar 16, 2024 6:24 pm
This was a cute little story that I had fun playing through. Also, the ending may have made me cry... maybe a little :pleading_face:
Thanks for crying :smil: /j
No but thank you, I'm glad you played.